Student Portfolio: Cyberbullying

First Draft

Complete First Draft

Reflection on First Draft and the Process of Self and Peer Evaluations

Thanks to the detailed outline, creating this first draft did not prove to be too difficult, but it was still a lengthy process. Nevertheless, it was very helpful. I thought my paper was in good shape, but the comments I received from my teacher proved otherwise. They helped me see the errors in formatting, the awkward ordering of my paragraphs, and made it obvious that some of the messages I was trying to say were not really clear to others--only to myself. I was able to reformat the ordering and add and change a few sentences to make my message clearer.

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