Student Portfolio: Cyberbullying

Final Draft

Cyberbullying: Final Draft


The comments I received on my first draft allowed me to restructure the arguments in my final draft; I also added more sentences to ease into topics better, or clarify the purpose of my information. Overall, I'm pleased with how my final draft turned out, given my first insecurities that I would not be able to reach 6 pages. I reached 7! I also learned a great deal about cyberbullying and its consequences, how serious the issue is, and some ways to prevent it. I am certain that my experience in writing my first lengthy research paper will greatly benefit me in college.

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